interim #1 technology

this is the submission for technology.. its under late submission =( i finished earlier but there was printing problem. really unsure about this assignment. the studio director was saying most of us have lots of research but we didn't show how we applied it.

probably this board isn't anywhere near a good example. should be more simple? my structure part isn't that clear because i don't know what i can decide in such a short time.. but all said, there's more space for improvement. i'm wondering.. how can i nail this subject.